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The Last Train

Hi everyone. Exciting news today! I’ve written and submitted a short story (roughly 1400 words) to the Vocal The Runaway Train Challenge. My story is HERE.Β 

Photo by Abbie Bernet on Unsplash

I’d love to know what you think! And I would be delighted if you could read my competition entry and leave a like. To like and/or comment, you’ll need to sign in to Vocal, which is free to do.


Thanks for all your support! Hugs πŸ€—πŸ’•πŸ™‚

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Hi Harmony! I couldn’t leave a comment on Vocal as I was having difficulty signing in.
The story is just wow! Thrilling and gut wrenching .. fantastic write. β€οΈπŸ™‚

Roberta Eaton Cheadle

A fantastic story, Harmony. I love how you wrote this piece.

Jacquie Biggar

My heart was speeding as fast as that bullet train! Excellent writing, Harmony <3


Loved this. Gave you a heart and commented.

Molly Shea

Wonderful short story.

Yvette M Calleiro

That was AMAZING, Harmony! My heart is still racing! πŸ™‚

Gwen Plano

Powerful writing, Harmony. Visceral fear, crushing details. Well done!

D.L. Finn

Well done, Harmony!

Jacqui Murray

Congratulations for this! Best of luck with the competition.

Judith (Judi Lynn) Post

Read it and loved it!


Good one!

My goodness…

Priscilla Bettis

Harmony, that’s the kind of story that makes me hold my breath through the tense parts. Very gripping, I loved it!

Joan Hall

That was a thriller! Nicely done.