#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 245, #THEMEPROMPT #Etheree @SyllabicPoetry @ColleenChesebro

Hi everyone! Today, I’ve joined Colleen’s weekly TankaTuesday challenge, and  for the first time, have written an Etheree poem mirrored. You can find her post HERE.

 

Eugi (Franci Hoffman) from last month’s challenge picked the theme:

THE HARVEST MOON

Below is my Mirrored Etheree response in a 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllabic format.

MOON TOUCHED

Moon touched poem on picture of moon: Moon So close I can touch An illusion Dreaming though awake Invitation or ruse? Time to harvest my desires Moonlight … fancies of flight … I choose Whether to dream, wake, or die tonight Lit by light of harvest moon let us fly Better to swoop and soar than waste the night In restless slumber and dreams mind bound Let us run free and dream awake Never must I life forsake Take the risk, make the leap Dream big and aim high Vision come true I touch moon’s Hallowed Soul
Image courtesy of PrettySleepy via Pixabay

 

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Miriam Hurdle

Take the risk, make the leap. Dream big and aim high… We all must hear this, young and old. Great job, Harmony. What a positive and encouraging poem.

Elizabeth

Wonderful, I specially like the ‘Let’s run free and dream awake’ it’s kind of matching my own poem.

Yvette M Calleiro

I love it, Harmony! Wonderful job! 🙂

JulesPaige

Well done. The moon is so inspirational!

willowdot21

Hi Harmony and welcome, what a beautiful poem , every line a wake up call 💜

Michele Jones

You did a nice job on this. I enjoyed the poem.

Roberta Eaton Cheadle

A lovely poem, Harmony.

Jan Sikes

That is excellent, Harmony! You did a great job with the challenge.

Joan Hall

Very nice, Harmony!

Colleen

Harmony, I love this Etheree to the Harvest moon. It’s a magical time as we edge closer to the end of the pagan year. Bravo to you for trying a new form. It’s lovely. 😍🍂🧡🍂

Jacquie Biggar

This is beautiful, Harmony. You captured hope in your lines- love it!

Eugenia

A beautifully crafted mirrored etheree, Harmony. The feel of autumn captured superbly.

D.L. Finn, Author

I love the beauty of a mirrored etheree and you really nailed it on your first try! You captured the autumn moons personality here. I can picture you reaching for that hallowed moon. Gorgeous, Harmony xo

Priscilla Bettis

What a fun way to write a poem. It turned out lovely!

john howell

Wow. That’s a tough one, Harmony. Well done and a beautiful Etheree Mirrored poem

Staci Troilo

Lovely, Harmony.

Diana Peach

Beautiful poem, Harmony, and so you! I love all the autumn prompts and poetry floating around. A pleasure to read here. <3

Gwen Plano

“Moon’s hallowed soul” — wow, Harmony. Extraordinary writing! I love your take on the prompt. 💗