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Prime Directive
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Hi everyone. I’ve written a short story (roughly 1650 words) for Vocalβs New Worlds Challenge.
We had to use the opening line:Β Nobody can hear a scream in the vacuum of space, or so they say.Β
And the story is to be written as the first chapter of a novel or novella.
My story is HERE.Β
I’d love to know what you think! And I would be delighted if you could read my competition entry and leave a like. To like and/or comment, you’ll need to sign in to Vocal, which is free to do.
Thanks for all your support! Hugs π€ππ
What a great intro to a story you may be able to turn into a book! I tried to ‘heart’ it, seeing as I did sign up there, but can longer π . But before I still couldn’t comment, and now I can’t even Heart it. <3
It might be worth contacting Vocal customer service? Sorry youβre having issues with them. Thanks, Debby! ππ
Harmony, that was an exciting first chapter! And what a cool idea for a prompt: the scream in space leading to a first chapter.
Thanks so much, Priscilla! ππ
Enjoyed this. I hearted it. But Art might have been showing mercy. The Canlores sound horrible.
They sure do. Who knows what might happen next?β¦ π Thanks, Judi ππ
Good one. Commented and hearted.
Thanks so much, Michele ππ
I’m off to read it, Harmony π
Thanks, Denise! ππ