#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRYCHALLENGE #277 #TASTETHERAINBOW @ColleenChesebro #Nonet
Hi everyone! 🙂
Today, I’ve joined Colleen’s weekly TankaTuesday challenge, which asks for us to create a syllabic poem based on “Taste the Rainbow”, where colour features in the poetry.
You can find Colleen’s post HERE.
Facets of Life
flamingo flush of new dawn imbues
comfort in a sky fast-filling
with dark thunderheads of doubt
soul’s waters grow muddied
in the grey downpour
indifferent
rain soaks through
derides
heart
mind
all will
confidence
just live not thrive
days of ebony
domineer and squash all
joy’s crimson sunrise-glow dulled
to the stratos of midnight hue
old and bent well before its season
roots dig deep and branches reach upward
e’en in the dark of endless night
stars twinkle, promise of sun
a fresh start still to come
breath of wind lifts fog
baby leaves bud
on bare limb
promise
hope
bloom
of growth
nourishment
from all the muck
a jewel is born
once polished, it displays
a multitude of facets
veritable kaleidoscope
that will shine through all weathers of life
Today, I chose a double nonet with four stanzas: At least two or more stanzas with nine lines each, featuring a syllable count of 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1, 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9 syllables per line with a title. Because of the hourglass shape of a double nonet, it can be used to represent time’s passage. They can be written on any subject. Add a title to all nonet forms.
I hope you enjoyed today’s poetry. Have a lovely day! 🙂
© Harmony Kent 2022
Wonderful visualisation and love the form Harmony ♥
Thanks so much, Sally. Hugs 💕🙂
Excellent telling Harmony. And you did a fab job with the double reverse nonet! <3
Thanks so much, Debby 💕🙂
Your verse reminds me of the lotus… which grows pretty much from muck!
And yet is a great symbol of prosperity and new dawnings.
Lovely. 🙂
I love lotuses and their symbology! Thanks, Jules 💕🙂
Harmony, this is so beautiful: “…joy’s crimson sunrise-glow dulled
to the stratos of midnight hue…” I love the nonet form as well. I can tell you love it. <3
Thanks so much, Colleen. Huge smiles here! 💕🙂
The colors of nature are indeed like promises.
They sure are. Thanks, Kerfe 💕🙂
Hi Harmony, this is such a pretty poem.
Hi Robbie. Thanks so much! 💕🙂
I love the symbolism of the nonet/hourglass with your poem’s theme.
“joy’s crimson sunrise-glow dulled
to the stratos of midnight hue”
That was just beautiful. Nicely done, Harmony.
Awesome! Thanks so much, Staci 💕🙂
I love this hourglass nonet I do love nonets . The words are so discriptive and so on point I got your meaning before even reading your discription. This is lovely well done 💜
I’ve fallen in live with this form. Thanks so much, Willow 💕🙂
Beautiful, Harmony 🙂 I loved the imagery and flow of this.
Fantastic! Thanks, Denise 💕🙂
Nice one, Harmony!
Yay! Thanks, Joan 💕🙂
Wow, from beginning to end. What a gorgeous piece, Harmony. Brava!
Fantastic! Thanks so much, Eugenia! 💕🙂
whoa, left me breathless as I read out loud but enjoyably so.
Oh, Jude, that is fantastic of you to say. Thank you so much. I’m so happy the poem moved you so much 💕🙂
beautiful; What more can I say.
That says it all! Thanks so much, Molly. You gladden my heart 💕🙂
Beautiful, Harmony! I love the notion of a “veritable kaleidoscope that will shine through all weathers of life.” WOW! 🤗
Thanks so much, Gwen. I’m delighted you enjoyed the poem as much as you did. Smiling away here 💕🙂
A very uplifting poem, harmony. Thanks for sharing
My pleasure! Thanks, John 💕🙂
“A jewel is born” what a lovely line. Cool poem, Harmony. I love this double nonet form.
Thanks so much, Priscilla. I think it’s becoming one of my favourite forms too 💕🙂
The imagery in this poem is beautiful, Harmony! Well done! 🙂
Fantastic! Thanks so much, Yvi. Big smiles here 💕🙂
“From all the muck, a jewel is born…” Wow, Harmony. Just beautiful and the photo is stunning!
That’s one of my favorite lines as well, Jan! 🙂
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I’m so thrilled the poem and that line spoke to you. Thanks so much, Jan 💕🙂
You had me at “flamingo flush of new dawn” and held me spell-bound to the end!
That’s fantastic! Thanks so much, Annette. That means a lot 💕🙂
That was beautiful, Harmony. I loved the descent into darkness and then the rise into the light and color at the end. That final line was exquisite: “the weathers of life.” Perfect.
That makes me so happy! Thanks, Diana 💕🙂