#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRYCHALLENGE #266 #ThemePrompt @ColleenChesebro #DropDrip poetry created by @YvetteMCalleiro

Hi everyone! ๐Ÿ™‚

Today, Iโ€™ve joined Colleenโ€™s weekly TankaTuesday challenge, which asks for us to create a syllabic poem based on the themes of Fire and Water, picked by Donna Matthews from last monthโ€™s challenge.

As ever, we need to avoid โ€˜ingโ€™ ending words if at all possible.

You can find Colleenโ€™s post HERE.

I’ve chosen to use a new form, Drop Drip, Created by Yvette M Callerio, which looks like a raindrop. The Drop-Drip has 12 lines with syllables 1-2-2-3-3-3-4-4-4-3-2-1. This creates a shape poem that looks like a raindrop. In my head, it looks like a large raindrop collecting on a ledge and falling once itโ€™s gathered enough weight. The form is untitled, and should be paired with a picture, but should be understood alone as well.

 

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Here is my poem:

Ukraine flag and yelling soldier, head shot, overlaid with fists of fire and water

Fire and Water Fists Image by Ivรกn Tamรกsย fromย Pixabay

Ukraine Flag and Soldier Image by ELG21ย fromย Pixabay

 

war

fire

water

bravery

love and loss

defiance

hot tears cascade

senseless pointless

raw violence

needs to stop

be kind

love

 

 

 

I hope you enjoyed this new form of syllabic poetry.ย Have a lovely day! ๐Ÿ™‚

 

ยฉ Harmony Kent 2022

 

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Gwen Plano

What a powerful poem, Harmony. You’ve captured the senselessness, the terror, the utter insanity of it all. Well done, my friend. ๐Ÿ’—

ben Alexander

How powerful, Harmony ~ you really rocked the form! Maybe I’ll have a go too!

Sincerely,
David

D.L. Finn, Author

I love this new form and it was perfect for your beautiful poem, Harmony!

Staci Troilo

I love the mixed media format. So powerful, Harmony.

Jan Sikes

It does indeed look like one long teardrop, Harmony. And your poem reaches my heart. I agree. All so senseless. Thank you for sharing. Great job on the prompt!

Selma Martin

Aww–Amazing, you! Loved.

Rox Burkey

This poem is remarkable and I thank you for the lesson, Harmony

Roberta Eaton Cheadle

Hi Harmony, this is a lovely poem. Drop drip is a great format.

JulesPaige/ Jules

One can only wonder why it is so difficult for some to ‘love’…
Wishing all peoples peace.

Elizabeth

Perfect poem! I love this drop drip form!

Diana Peach

That form works so well, Harmony. I love how your poem builds and then ends with a beautiful wish. Just lovely.

Mae Clair

A wonderful job, Harmony. And so appropriate given world events.

Annette R Aben

You did the prompt and the form proper credit! <3

Jacquie Biggar

Beautiful and heart-wrenching, Harmony <3

Yvette M Calleiro

I’m so honored that you chose to use my new poetry form, Harmony, and I absolutely love your poem! Your use of fire and water and its different symbols really tied together with your theme. I especially love the “hot tears” which combines both fire and water in their essence. Beautifully done! ๐Ÿ™‚

Harmony, I think Yvette’s “Drip Drop” form was a perfect choice for the theme. Well done. You expressed in your poem what we all feel… the war in Ukraine needs to stop. <3

Priscilla Bettis

It IS shaped like a drop, cool. Excellent poem, Harmony. War is awful, tears indeed.

john howell

Wow. I enjoyed this, Harmony. Your “X” graph added to the visual too. Great job.