#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRYCHALLENGE #286 #ThemePrompt #haiku @ColleenCheseboro
Hi everyone! 🙂
Today, I’ve joined Colleen’s weekly TankaTuesday challenge, which asks for us to create a syllabic poem based on the theme prompt: Lessons from nature.
This week, I’ve chosen a Haiku poem.
You can find Colleen’s post HERE.
Here’s my take …
Water trickles, flows
Decorates moss-covered rocks
Slips past obstacles
The fluidity of water has always held special significance for me. I hope you enjoyed today’s poetry.
If you missed my moving Vocal poem, Oh for the Softness of Silence, from yesterday, and would like to check it out, you can find it HERE.
Have a lovely day! 🙂
© Harmony Kent 2022
Beautiful Harmony. xx
Thanks, Debby! 💕🙂
Wonderful Harmony… the power of water is extraordinary and usually underrated.. love the last line..
Thanks so much, Sally! 💕🙂
Harmony, that last line of yours makes me jealous of the water! 😀
~David
Lols. Yep! Thanks, David 💕🙂
Slips past obstacles — put so beautifully.
Thanks, Reena! 💕🙂
Lovely imagery here. I can see and hear the water.
Thanks so much, Margaret 💕🙂
Harmony, this is a zappai, not exactly a haiku. Remember haiku, must have a season word in order to be a haiku. https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/04/20/haiku-zappai/. That being said, I still get where you were going with your thoughts and they are lovely. 💜
The poetry foundation and other sources tell me Haiku don’t HAVE to contain a season. In fact, most of the traditional Japanese Haiku I’m familiar with, don’t contain a season word at all. I suppose it depends on which school of thought you subscribe to.
It could be the traditional spiritual Haiku have different criteria … either that, or the Zen masters simply didn’t care, lols 😂
This from Matsuo Basho, who wrote this classic haiku in the 1600s:
An old pond!
A frog jumps in—
the sound of water.
Thanks for your thoughts.
HI Harmony, this is a very lovely poem.
So pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks, Robbie 💕🙂
I can picture the water flowing over rocks as I read your poem. Wonderful imagery.
Fantastic. Thanks, Molly 💕🙂
A lovely message from water, Harmony. Such hidden strength there too – the power of persistence that carves away mountains. Beautiful haiku, my friend.
Thanks so much, Diana! 💕🙂
Wonderful, Harmony – so insightful. Toni x
Thanks so much, Toni 💕🙂
Love this, Harmony. Yes, water can definitely find its way past obstacles, which is why it’s so soothing to watch a waterfall.
So soothing! Thanks, Denise 💕🙂
Beautiful and profound message, conveyed so succinctly! Superb.
Thanks so much, Balroop 💕🙂
Wonderful haiku, Harmony! The neighbor lady once described me as a “water baby.” I’m a middle-aged woman, but she’s almost 90, so it’s okay that I’m a baby to her. Anyway, the fluidity of water holds significance to me, too. I guess the neighbor somehow figured that out.
That’s fantastic, Priscilla 💕🙂
Water is so strong it wears the stone away… again we could learn so much from nature …I love your poem 😍
For sure! Thanks so much, Willow 💕🙂
Brilliant! I love it, Harmony. ❤️
Thanks, Gwen! 💕🙂
I could hear it, see it and feel it! Job well done, Harmony!
Thanks so much, Annette! 💕🙂
Lovely!
Thanks, Misky! 💕🙂
Oh, to be fluid like water! Beautifully done, Harmony!
Thanks, Jan! 💕🙂
I love that about water, too, Harmony. Beautiful poem.
Thanks, Staci 💕🙂
You captured the feelings of the flowing water, Harmony.
Thanks so much, John! 💕🙂