#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRYCHALLENGE #285 #Ekphrastic #PhotoPrompt #4-11 @ColleenCheseboro @gmplano
Hi everyone! ๐
Today, Iโve joined Colleenโs weekly TankaTuesday challenge, which asks for us to create an Ekphrastic syllabic poem based on a photo prompt. Reena Saxena provided a piece of her artwork for this weekโs challenge ย โฆ
I loved the new form of 4-11 created by Gwen Plano,ย so much that I used it again this week.
The 4-11 poetic form has 11 lines of 4 syllables each, and the first line repeats on the last line.
You can find Colleenโs post HERE.
Hereโs my take โฆ
Fabric of Life
A patchwork quilt
Warp overlaid
Stitches undoneย
Shifted and shaped
Nap rearranged
Metamorphosed
From chrysalisย
To butterfly
Freely expressed
Myriad choice
A patchwork quilt
Todayโs poem, as happened last week, can be read from bottom to top as well as top to bottom. I hope you enjoyed today’s poetry. Have a lovely day! ๐
ยฉ Harmony Kent 2022
How interesting that you saw it as a patchwork quilt, Harmony. Now that you say it, it does look like that and in fact, reminds me of a puffer jacket. Lovely poem!
Thanks, Smitha ๐๐
I love this, Harmony! Beautifully stitched together. ๐โค๏ธ
Thanks so much, Punam! ๐๐
A beautifully woven poem Harmony. <3 x
Thanks so much, Debby! ๐๐
Incredibly clever, Harmony – especially the dynamic between the lines that start with ‘to’ and ‘from’ – that’s just ingenious!
~David
Thanks, David! Much appreciated ๐๐
Superb! I like the idea of ‘stitches undone’. It leads to reconstruction.
It does! Thanks, Reena ๐๐
I like Gwenโs poetry form too! Your poem is so good! Your take on Reenaโs artwork is unique, but as soon as I read the word patchwork it made total sense to me. Excellent!๐ฅฐ
Thanks so much, Vashti ๐๐
Love it, Harmony! ๐
Thanks, Yvi! ๐๐
I am always amazed at the patchwork quilt patterns. So different and yet some similar. It just depends on ‘your’ scraps.
Here in Amish country… we see quite a few patchwork quilts hanging on the lines at Amish farms ๐
Nicey word-stitched!
Thanks so much, Jules ๐๐
Beautiful, Harmony… Sharing!
Thanks so much, Bette! All shares much appreciated! ๐๐
So beautiful, Harmony. I love it! You’ve captured the movement of life in your poem – as seen in this image. Well done, my friend! โค๏ธ
Thanks so much, Gwen, for your lovely words. Hugs ๐๐
Love this, Harmony. Our lives are beautiful patchworks, some tattered, some lace, all lovely <3
They sure are! Thanks, Jacquie ๐๐
Beautiful picture and poem. I love making crazy quilts. That’s what the picture reminded me of when I first saw it.
Thatโs the first thing that came to mind when I saw it. Thanks, Molly ๐๐
This was fun, Harmony!
Thanks, Denise! ๐๐
Excellent poem, Harmony. I love how you saw a patchwork quilt, and how you fit the natural world within the folds. The 4-11 form is really a lovely one to write. ๐
I love Gwenโs 4-11 form! Thanks, Colleen ๐๐
Great job! I could visualize.
Fantastic! Thanks, Ruth ๐๐
I love this, Harmony!
Fantastic! Thanks, Jan ๐๐
Hi Harmony, this is lovely. My dad used to make patchwork quilts.
Thatโs fantastic! Thanks, Robbie ๐๐
You are so right Harmony… the art work exhibits the fabric of life and you have captured it so well through your words. Well-done!
Thatโs wonderful to know. Thanks so much, Balroop ๐๐
Oooh, Harmony. Just gorgeous. I loved this one. <3 <3
Thanks so much, Diana ๐๐
Super cool poem, Harmony. It reminds me of my grandmother’s quilt which I still have.:-)
Thatโs lovely. Thanks, Priscilla ๐๐
a fun poem, Harmony.
Thanks, John! ๐๐
Cleverly written and I love this form too! Well done, Harmony.
Thanks so much, Eugi ๐๐
Clever! It does rather resemble a patchwork quilt. Well done.
Thanks, Annette! ๐๐