#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRYCHALLENGE #2-31-05-22 #SHAREYOURDAY @ColleenChesebro #Kerf

Hi everyone! ๐Ÿ™‚

Today, Iโ€™ve joined Colleenโ€™s weekly TankaTuesday challenge, which asks for us to create a syllabic poem based on our day.

You can find Colleenโ€™s post HERE.

 

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Flash Flood

 

Carried down the river

Torrent of sudden flash flood

Float on my back, looking for the rainbow

 

The shock makes me shiver

This rain of pain isnโ€™t good

Though what can I do but go with the flow

 

Sunshine all day forecast

Not out of control deluge

Knocked off my feet, which only goes to showย 

 

Good or bad, it wonโ€™t last

Plans canโ€™t provide a refuge

Trust yourself and let your inner sun glow

 

Today, I chose a Kerf:

  • 12 lines made up of 4 tercets;
  • syllabic: 6/7/10 per line;
  • rhymed: rhyme scheme abc abc dec dec.

ย 

Yesterday went somewhat awry. One thing happened that cascaded into another, and before I knew it, all plans were off. Amusingly, my day matched the weather. The morning started sunny, as forecast, then turned into heavy rain and flash floods. From an active start, I ended up needing to rest and take medication for a deluge of pain. By the evening, the sun had returned in its full brilliance โ€ฆ a gorgeous reminder of what can happen when we embrace the storm and go with the flow.

I hope you enjoyed today’s poetry. Have a lovely day! ๐Ÿ™‚

 

ยฉ Harmony Kent 2022

 

46 Comments on “#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRYCHALLENGE #2-31-05-22 #SHAREYOURDAY @ColleenChesebro #Kerf

  1. Fitting for a true flood or a flood of emotions that seem out of control.
    There is that saying; Make plans and the Higher Powers will just laugh ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. Harmony, I hope your days improved through the week. I’ve had some down days myself, but am slowing coming around on Saturday. I can’t thank you enough for sharing the posts on Twitter. I appreciate you! <3

    • I hope youโ€™re doing better. Thanks, Colleen. Hugs ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Hi Harmony, this is a most interesting poem. I am sorry you had a lot of pain and had to rest. I’ve also had a bad health week with my blood pressure spiking a few times.

    • So sorry about your blood pressure, Robbie, and hope things settle down soon for you. Hugs ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Extraordinary poem, Harmony. Going with the flow is not easy, but you manage it in ways most of us can not. Thank you for being beautiful you. ๐Ÿ’—

    • Thanks Jacquie. Hugs always appreciated! Hugs your way too ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

    • Thatโ€™s brilliant! Thanks so much, Laura ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Embrace The Storm…I love that, Harmony. This is a powerful poem!

  6. What a challenging format that you handled so well. Sorry your day took a turn but glad it turned around when you went with it.

  7. a gorgeous reminder of what can happen when we embrace the storm and go with the flow.” Love that, Harmony! Great poem, as always! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Thanks so much, John! Delighted you enjoyed the poem ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

  8. A great one, Harmony. But, honestly do not ask my about the syllables and the metric “Kerf”. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks for the explaination. xx Michael

    • No quizzes today, lols! ๐Ÿ˜‰Thanks so much, Michael. Hugs ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Beautiful and beautifully meaningful, Harmony! And here’s to days with less rain and more sunshine, especially where you health is concerned. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿค—

    • Thanks so much, Priscilla. The weather provided the perfect accompaniment! ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™‚