#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRYCHALLENGE #2-31-05-22 #SHAREYOURDAY @ColleenChesebro #Kerf
Hi everyone! 🙂
Today, I’ve joined Colleen’s weekly TankaTuesday challenge, which asks for us to create a syllabic poem based on our day.
You can find Colleen’s post HERE.
Flash Flood
Carried down the river
Torrent of sudden flash flood
Float on my back, looking for the rainbow
The shock makes me shiver
This rain of pain isn’t good
Though what can I do but go with the flow
Sunshine all day forecast
Not out of control deluge
Knocked off my feet, which only goes to show
Good or bad, it won’t last
Plans can’t provide a refuge
Trust yourself and let your inner sun glow
Today, I chose a Kerf:
- 12 lines made up of 4 tercets;
- syllabic: 6/7/10 per line;
- rhymed: rhyme scheme abc abc dec dec.
Yesterday went somewhat awry. One thing happened that cascaded into another, and before I knew it, all plans were off. Amusingly, my day matched the weather. The morning started sunny, as forecast, then turned into heavy rain and flash floods. From an active start, I ended up needing to rest and take medication for a deluge of pain. By the evening, the sun had returned in its full brilliance … a gorgeous reminder of what can happen when we embrace the storm and go with the flow.
I hope you enjoyed today’s poetry. Have a lovely day! 🙂
© Harmony Kent 2022
I loved your poem Harmony. And I’m so glad the sun did come out for you. <3
Thanks so much, Debby! 💕🙂
Fitting for a true flood or a flood of emotions that seem out of control.
There is that saying; Make plans and the Higher Powers will just laugh 😉
For certain! Thanks, Jules 💕🙂
For sure, we need to go with the flow, a little rain can be as much pleasure as the sunshine.
It sure can! 💕🙂
Harmony, I hope your days improved through the week. I’ve had some down days myself, but am slowing coming around on Saturday. I can’t thank you enough for sharing the posts on Twitter. I appreciate you! <3
I hope you’re doing better. Thanks, Colleen. Hugs 💕🙂
Hope the rest of your week got better!!
Thanks, Ruth! 💕🙂
Hi Harmony, this is a most interesting poem. I am sorry you had a lot of pain and had to rest. I’ve also had a bad health week with my blood pressure spiking a few times.
So sorry about your blood pressure, Robbie, and hope things settle down soon for you. Hugs 💕🙂
This is beautiful, an acceptance of life 💜💜
Thanks so much, Willow 💕🙂
I love that last line, Harmony. Such strength and resilience. A beautiful poem.
Thanks so much, Diana! 💕🙂
Loved the message in this one, Harmony. Something to remember on a daily basis. Great job!
For me too! Thanks, Mae 💕🙂
Very visual, Harmony. Life doesn’t always go as we’d like it to, but we can choose to go with the flow.
Thanks, Joan 💕🙂
Extraordinary poem, Harmony. Going with the flow is not easy, but you manage it in ways most of us can not. Thank you for being beautiful you. 💗
Oh, Gwen, thanks so very much! Hugs 💕🙂
I’m sorry you had a bad day yesterday, Harmony. {{hugs}}
Thanks Jacquie. Hugs always appreciated! Hugs your way too 💕🙂
I love THE style and YOUR style, Harmony. ❤️
That’s brilliant! Thanks so much, Laura 💕🙂
inner sun… what a lovely image
Thanks, Annette! 💕🙂
Embrace The Storm…I love that, Harmony. This is a powerful poem!
That’s fantastic! Thanks so much, Jan 💕🙂
What a challenging format that you handled so well. Sorry your day took a turn but glad it turned around when you went with it.
Thanks so much, Denise 💕🙂
“a gorgeous reminder of what can happen when we embrace the storm and go with the flow.” Love that, Harmony! Great poem, as always! 🙂
Thanks so much, Yvi! 💕🙂
I’m sorry for your pain but your poem is wonderful, Harmony. I’m glad the sun came out.
Thanks so much, John! Delighted you enjoyed the poem 💕🙂
Some days the best we can do is to go with the flow. I enjoyed this poem very much.
For sure! Thanks so much, Molly! 💕🙂
A great one, Harmony. But, honestly do not ask my about the syllables and the metric “Kerf”. 😉 Thanks for the explaination. xx Michael
No quizzes today, lols! 😉Thanks so much, Michael. Hugs 💕🙂
Beautiful and beautifully meaningful, Harmony! And here’s to days with less rain and more sunshine, especially where you health is concerned. 🤗💖🤗
Thanks so much, Marcia! Hugs 💕🙂
Great poem, Harmony. Love the ending!
Thanks so much, Staci! 💕🙂
I’m glad sunny skies returned to your body. I can see the events unfolding in your poem, excellent read!
Thanks so much, Priscilla. The weather provided the perfect accompaniment! 💕🙂