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“Fiction In A Flash Challenge” Week #11 NEW Image Prompt. @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity.

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Hi everyone!

I hope you’ve had a good week. I don’t know about you, but I’m looking forward to the weekend. My muse developed a playful mood today, and I have a bit of flash fiction for you, entitled In the Wild.

The image prompt comes from Soooz’s blog: https://sooozburkeauthor.wordpress.com/2020/07/31/fiction-in-a-flash-challenge-week-11-new-image-prompt-pursoot-iartg-asmsg-writingcommunity/. 

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In the Wild

Exhausted, Teri stared at the burnt and broken tree while cold spray from the violent waterfall settled onto her exposed skin. With a raised and tired arm, she used her fingers to wipe sweat from her forehead and thought back over all the horrific miles she’d endured.

Her once-pristine Converse now lay in tatters around her cut and swollen feet. The trainers had never been meant for rugged mountain and forest trekking. One of the laces had snapped—too short to tie. On the other shoe, the sole flapped uselessly every time she took a step.

Her legs stung and itched, covered from ankle to mid-thigh in various bug bites and scratches from foliage unforgiving of her trespass. Mud and dirt and the damp green residue of the assorted local fauna stained the hem of her shorts. Her tee-shirt more resembled a soaked dish rag than an item of fashion. Meanwhile, her bra now served as a sling for her broken left arm.

Though it couldn’t possibly help her out of this dire situation, Teri revisited the events that had dumped her into the voracious, man-eating wilderness in the first place. Okay, so maybe she had been driving too fast. But, hey … over-the-top karma, anyone? Sure, she was fairly confident that she’d killed the deer in the road. But hadn’t crashing into the giant sequoia and banging herself up been repayment enough? Karma, it seemed, had other ideas. The little Nissan Micra had bounced off the tree and then rolled. Right off the edge of a cliff. More trees had broken the fall. Had kept her alive for this torture. And she’d even escaped the wreck before it burst into flames.

After assessing her injuries, Teri had made a sling of her bra and then done a funny crawling shamble on one arm and two knees to the pool at the base of the waterfall. Refreshed from the long drink of the chilly nectar, Teri studied the deep valley in which she’d landed. Sheer cliff walls surrounded her. Too steep to climb in her current condition, her only option was to walk down the valley and follow the stream.

The stream grew up and became a river, which must lead to civilisation soon, right? Before long, the terrain had forced her to forge a path far away from the rocky walls of the river canyon. And not long after that, tired, in pain, and disoriented from the knock to the head she’d taken, Teri had gotten lost.

A fresh pang of regret rolled sickeningly in her stomach—all that money burned. She reckoned the raid on the bank had netted her about a million. Now it was all gone. Nothing but ash and smoke mingled with the stench of burnt rubber, upholstery, and hot metal.

Again, Teri stared at the burnt and broken tree while cold spray from the violent waterfall settled onto her exposed skin. With a raised and tired arm, she used her fingers to wipe sweat from her forehead and thought back over all the horrific miles she’d endured.

At the base of the broken trunk lay the wreck of her Micra. After everything she’d endured, Teri had come full circle. Right back to where she’d started.

Exhausted, Teri slumped onto a moss-covered rock and wept. Far, far above, the mournful wail of police sirens scared the birds from the trees.

 

Copyright ©Harmony Kent 2020

I hope you enjoyed this bit of fun, and I’d love to hear your thoughts. If you’d like to take part, here’s the link again: https://sooozburkeauthor.wordpress.com/2020/07/31/fiction-in-a-flash-challenge-week-11-new-image-prompt-pursoot-iartg-asmsg-writingcommunity/.

Here are the rules:

Please put it (or a link to it) in a comment on Soooz’s blog or email it to her at her email address. by DEADLINE: 4pm EDT on Thursday, August 6th. Subject: Fiction in a Flash Challenge. If you post it on your own blog or site, a link to Soooz’s blog page would be much appreciated.

She will be sharing all entries received, and, her own contribution on her blog beginning on Friday, August 7th.

Here is the week #11 Image Prompt.

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Thanks to Adrian Mato for sharing their FREE IMAGE on Unsplash.

Photo by Adrian Mato on Unsplash

We hope the image inspires you! Come and join in the fun.

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33 Comments on ““Fiction In A Flash Challenge” Week #11 NEW Image Prompt. @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity.”

  2. Talk about a lesson learned the hard way. On a good note, with the evidence all burnt, she should be in the clear as far as the bank heist. 🙂 But, has she really learned anything? That was the question I was left with. Great little story! It’s amazing where the muse can take us! Well-done!

    • Lols. There are so many possible spin-offs from just this short bit of fiction. Great fodder for the muse! So glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks, Jan 😊

    • I’m sure she learnt it at least temporarily, lols. So delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks, Yvi 😊

  4. Sorry I’m late, but cool story, Harmony! Love the surprising ending. Flash fiction is something I’ve never attempted, but you seem to have mastered it, for sure. This was a fun read.

    • Having a GREAT BIG HURRICANE headed your way gives you ample excuse, Marcia! Thanks so much for taking the time from your preparation to stop by. So glad you enjoyed the story. Hugs 😊

  6. Now that’s my kinda Karma! Whoo-hoo! 👍You clearly had a great time writing this, Harmony! Thanks so much for taking part, I look forward to sharing your contribution on Friday, August 7th.😊

    • Yep, less evidence now 😁. Glad you like the story. Thanks, John 😊

  8. Karma was in a kick-ass mood for poor Teri. She got a double whammy, but then, she’d committed two crimes. Loved the twist at the end!

    • She definitely didn’t get away with her shenanigans this time! Thanks, Judi 😊

  9. She definitely got what was coming to her, including what drinking the water will do to her soon. I could feel her pain trudging through the woods getting insect bites with her injuried arm. Good one Harmony.

    • Yep, no filter, no nothing. Talk about what goes around … tee he hee. Thanks, Denise 😊

  12. What a great story! I trudged with Teri through the incredible climb and suffered her reflection, but importantly, I ended up with a new respect for bras! 😀

  14. Try again, Teri. That water has to escape the bowl of cliffs somehow. The cops will help, but at what expense? See, I’m hooked. Great story, Harmony.